1. Introduction
- In (his/her) [genre of work] “title of work” (date), [name of author], [phrase describing author], (asserts/argues/suggests/implies/claims that) [author’s major assertion/argument/thesis].
- [Author] (develops/supports) (his/her) (argument/message) through the use of [rhetorical choice #1, #2, and #3 in chronological order]
- (he/she/author last name) writes to [author’s purpose] in order to [what purpose aims to achieve]
- [Author] writes for an audience of [state author’s intended audience] as shown with (his/her) [what makes this the intended audience], and [author] ultimately moves this audience to [what is the audience supposed to do/act like after experiencing the text]
2. Body Paragraphs
- Topic sentence
- BP1: [Author] begins (with/by) [rhetorical choice 1], highlighting [purpose/effect of rhetorical choice in relation to your thesis/what prompt asks/author’s message]
- BP2: Building off the strategy, [author last name] used to begin with, (he/she) [connect last sentence of previous paragraph to first paragraph of this paragraph and show how strategies build upon each other]
- BP3: Concluding the argument, [author] [connect last sentence of previous paragraph to first paragraph of this paragraph and show how strategies build upon each other]
- Evidence #1
- Introduce evidence using context
- Quote example
- Your claim about the evidence (What the evidence does related to the passage)
- Commentary
- Explain the effect of evidence #1 in relation to either credibility (ethos), passion or emotion (pathos), or logic (logos)
- While doing this, tie the specific use of the strategy in to your claim and the theme/main idea of the work
- Evidence #2
- Advance your idea by providing more evidence
- Format: [Tie in previous evidence and its effect] [start talking about second piece of evidence, continuing your claim about the strategy named in the topic sentence] [textual evidence]
- Commentary #2
- Explain the effect of evidence #2 (should be the same strategy as evidence #1) in relation to either credibility (ethos), passion or emotion (pathos), or logic (logos)
- While doing this, tie the specific use of the strategy in to your claim and the theme/main idea of the work
- Closing Sentence
- Explain how your examples of the specific rhetorical device connect and are effective in conveying your thesis and the theme of the work
- For sophistication, try to tie in audience. Say how rhetorical device coveys thesis/theme to “x audience” and/or why this device is good for x purpose for x audience
3. Conclusion
- Rephrase thesis statement
- Comes first in conclusion
- Briefly analyze how author has achieved their purpose (through using certain rhetorical strategies)
- Add sophistication and dig deeper than your thesis you used in your intro
- Highlight main ideas made during your analysis
- Short explanation of the main points discussed
- Why main points are important
- How they link to your thesis
- Importance of the rhetorical strategies used
- If strategies were effective in conveying author’s message
- Closing thought
- Close out the main purpose of the text being analyzed
- Be thoughtful and use powerful clencher
Example essay I wrote using this template:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oRd6Ye8C0W8LuCbElHu-dfb5zNx38C-MimRZZeeOZsQ/edit?usp=sharing